Tuesday, 17 May 2011

Writing goal update




All the kids at school were happily playing when the 6.3 started. We walked to the field after the earthquake had stopped. Well we were walking to the field the emergency bell started ringing. It took a while to stop ringing.

This is a paragraph that was in my report. This paragraph gets the reader to picture this in their mind.

The goal I have made progress on this week is my writing goal which is to get to level 4 in the NZ curriculum.

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